Shrooms Signature

A user on a different forum requested a signature off of me, so I decided to give it a try, his request was something with mushrooms in it.
The text should say Shrooms, and he wanted the signature both with the text, and another copy without the text.
The style should be a bit psychedelic, a bit of neon / glow, but not too much, just a tiny tiny bit.

After doing quite a bit of thinking, a lot of sketching, dumping, drawing, coming up with new ideas, dumping it again etc.
I eventually came up with these two:





I would just like some opinions, and if possible some tips, I feel the text is a little off though.
Any advice and feedback is greatly appreciated! :angel:

I think it's pretty cool.

(08-12-2016, 12:59 PM)Dearlord Wrote:

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I think it's pretty cool.

Thank you, anything you think I could have changed about it?
Something that could have been improved or what?

I like it a lot, however I'd like to see a background behind the shrooms with blue sky & clouds or a night background with stars

(08-12-2016, 01:42 PM)Cumslut Wrote:

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(08-12-2016, 12:59 PM)Dearlord Wrote:

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I think it's pretty cool.

Thank you, anything you think I could have changed about it?
Something that could have been improved or what?

What devourz said a background would make the mushrooms stand out much better imo.

(08-12-2016, 04:00 PM)Devourz Wrote:

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I like it a lot, however I'd like to see a background behind the shrooms with blue sky & clouds or a night background with stars

Well if I were to add some background behind the mushrooms, it would definitely be night to fit the theme.
I just feel it'd be a bit crowded / too much if I were to do that, who knows, I may give it a try later and then update it here.

I'm not too keen on the colour of the text. Looks good though.

That's pretty dope man. Well done.

(08-12-2016, 04:48 PM)Cumslut Wrote:

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(08-12-2016, 04:00 PM)Devourz Wrote:

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I like it a lot, however I'd like to see a background behind the shrooms with blue sky & clouds or a night background with stars

Well if I were to add some background behind the mushrooms, it would definitely be night to fit the theme.
I just feel it'd be a bit crowded / too much if I were to do that, who knows, I may give it a try later and then update it here.

Im eager to see the attempt

(08-12-2016, 05:26 PM)Zodiac Wrote:

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I'm not too keen on the colour of the text. Looks good though.

Thank you, was debating with myself whether or not to go for a purple-ish color like the mushrooms or just have it blue, decided to go for blue. My inspiration was a sort of Alice in Wonderland style, where there's a bit of mixed colors, so thought the blue would be a decent add. Where if I went for the purple, it'd be too much of the same.

(08-12-2016, 05:29 PM)Blur Wrote:

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That's pretty dope man. Well done.

Appreciated!